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Wed, 2008-07-02 03:42 — ano

I think I’ve dug deep enough
No treasure here
I didn’t have a map
Perhaps
that was the problem
all along

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Fri, 2008-07-04 04:22 — atrakasya

great

Like I always say, I typically don’t read poetry much - but this one was good. simple, and penetrating at the same time.
- atra


Thu, 2008-07-03 17:33 — La Louve

Plan map

But without a map, you land up on an adventure, with one, you just travel. i liked it too.


Thu, 2008-07-03 03:46 — ano

Thanks

Thanks Capn. I rather liked the way this poem turned out.


Wed, 2008-07-02 06:40 — Captain Nemo

lovely...

Ano,
This is a lovely poem… I like the metaphors used a lot.
Very simple but very deep too…