Laziness, Poetry, Inertia, New Beginnings....
Thu, 2005-05-26 14:51 — Silent Melody
Yes, Yes I know that I am supposed to post “THE PART III” but as someone said on DSS “let life be my excuse”. (It was Doh, right?).
It has been a long time since I posted the Part II of my story. A lot has changed for the DSSer’s; we have shifted to this awesome new place. Buck, IBL and SSM (and others who have contributed) U GUYS ROCK and thanks for taking all the pains. I still have not made myself comfy here and I am yet to explore all the rooms here but this looks like a great place. And Cheti and inimai are already thinking about decorating this place (Did u guys check out the DSS logo ideas they have come up with? Great!!). It is heartning to see this kind of closeness, enthusiasm, warmth and “apnapan” or a “sense of belonging” in a virtual community (I know it is not exactly “virtual” now). I feel great to be a part of this group and sometimes I even catch myself thinking or dreaming about the DSS 10-20 years from now. haha. But then dreaming is perhaps the only thing I am doing these days.
Sometimes, I just do not feel like doing anything at all and particularly writing the part III of my story. haha. I feel as if Life is just flowing by and I have no control on it and whatz more I do not want to have control over it.
Check out this link for a poem (Hindi Poem) written in such a mood sometime back.I tried to post an English transalation also but it did not work out.
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interesting
silo,
overall a good effort, but it seemed tortured – not natural in your normal vein.
I liked these lines the best:
Tum bhi ho aur main bhi hoon
aur shayad se woh pyaar bhi.
Lekin kuch hai jo nahin hai,
ya shaayad se kuch tha hi nahin.
That could have been a perfect ending in itself, i think you sound apologetic in the next line.
In general, liked the germ, but I think you might have done it better justice in English. Your english poems never seem to struggle for words, like this one does – or maybe it’s just my awkwardness with hindi. That’s for you to decide, I’m just providing the promised honest feedback.
regards,
asuph.
Why are all Hyderabadies such poets :)))
Now get to work on part 3!
LOL SSM
hey SSM, I remember blood oath very well. We shud flock together and maybe we cud get together sometime and exchange resistance strategies!!
Hey Bleu, u really think that is a good idea, kya
good?
NO. its a very bad idea. but, thats prolly why I am suggesting it to you. ;p
as a teaser idea
you can release the first part of part 3 and keep us waiting for the remaining parts of part 3. (Zeno’s paradox)
resist, resist
silo, my dear comrade-in-stuck-in-part-X-land … do not give in. resist with all your strength.
remember the blood-oath you, me & scout signed yesterday, we folks gotta stick together.
LOL ssm!!
Lol @ the oath!! Silo, donot_ go the ssm way… and post that part 3 before I forget what happened in parts 1 & 2!!!
Thanks and No - Thanks !!
hey Fizz read your comment on my page. Glad you liked it and you shall have your Part III.
Anantha, what there are no prizes for early birds??? hehehe I did not know that!! Come on I did not write for the heck of writing, wanted to share my mood and poem with you all :sniff sniff:
Hey Buck the link is working but I am not able to make paragraphs and i have tried everything from < p > and < / p> tags and line breaks, no tags and double returns !! Can someone help me out??
part 3
part 3 part 3 *hmmpf*
actually
there are no prizes for early birds..u did not have to take all the pain for writing this much
Is this a blog btw ?!!! C’mon give a good start to new DSS life ..its not like reading a book while on honeymoon
j/k ( dont like to write that but since u try to diplomatic , i am trying to be the same
…really hard though !! )
so the href tag worked
cool…it takes a li’l looking around, but i am sure u’ll soon feel comfy here…